History Class Poem

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By xXxHannahxXx

Taste the soot and the smoke in a blood loss complexion as the last plume of life bleeds into the black sky and the eyes of the dead yeild us no detection of councious thought and reconisition just soul less motion and submission see the pale hands of ice as they drive in direction of quickening pace that none can maintain and they fumble and fail and lose all conception of beauty,love and full sensation to these they never find relation we watch them bloom and billow like smoke in dire night as the hopes that people live for abandon and take flight the countless and the hope less gave all they could give and yet they were forced to die just so they could live.

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April 1, 2007 20:03Crimson.Wings

This is beautiful. I like the personification, and the line "and yet they were forced to die just so they could live" is great.

April 8, 2007 12:34liberty moon

good stuff... i like it