the enemy i create, by a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.
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i am my own enemy
from the pain i create
through the pain i can see
all the hate
i dont hurt myself
as much as the people around me do
but the reason no one knows
is because of you
im writing about nothing
because thats what you are
a fling gone to far
the begining of a broken heart
since you are gone now all i have to hate
is me my enemy
this thing i create.
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| Posted: 2007-08-29 02:00:10 UTC |
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| 2007-04-01 01:41:43 | Lil'Fighter |
| Great Poem! One of the best i've read. oh and thanks for the comment. :) |
| 2007-04-06 03:18:15 | Crimson.Wings |
| I like this poem. I like how the poem winds its way back to the beginning again and the line "a fling gone too far" is interesting.
By the way, thanks for your comment. |
| 2007-05-06 18:55:18 | gwen0193 |
| that is really good |
| 2007-07-26 17:58:03 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| good poem well written. why is it we always hurt the one's we love the most? We should love ourself and not be the enemy to ourself. then we can love another truly, and if you love someone set them free if they come back to you they are your love, if not they never were. Your poetry makes me think deeply. I like that! thaNKS. lUV Glo |