the enemy i create

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By a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad. •

i am my own enemy from the pain i create through the pain i can see all the hate i dont hurt myself as much as the people around me do but the reason no one knows is because of you im writing about nothing because thats what you are a fling gone to far the begining of a broken heart since you are gone now all i have to hate is me my enemy this thing i create.

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April 1, 2007 01:41Lil'Fighter

Great Poem! One of the best i've read. oh and thanks for the comment. :)

April 6, 2007 03:18Crimson.Wings

I like this poem. I like how the poem winds its way back to the beginning again and the line "a fling gone too far" is interesting.

By the way, thanks for your comment.

May 6, 2007 18:55gwen0193

that is really good

July 26, 2007 17:58 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

good poem well written. why is it we always hurt the one's we love the most? We should love ourself and not be the enemy to ourself. then we can love another truly, and if you love someone set them free if they come back to you they are your love, if not they never were. Your poetry makes me think deeply. I like that! thaNKS. lUV Glo