One more chance

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By Sithlim •

The colors on the wing of the butterfly, The sounds that we hear when to the south the birds fly... The assurance that a lost son feel when in mother’s lap he cry.. The satisfaction in achieving after a hundred try.. The softness of flowing water.. The assuring toughness of a rough father.. The end of the day after defeating al the dangers... The smiling faces of unknown strangers.. The men, women and Their memories.. The child, the adult and their stories.. That’s what life is made up of!! little things... These little things which we never take notice of.. That’s what life is made up of.. And then on that day, when we die.. We always say with a sigh.. God just give me one more chance. I will live this life with renewed romance. S I T H L I M

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April 4, 2007 03:07~**AGE_TEA**~

i like this poem, its rhyme and its true. good job

AgeTea

April 4, 2007 05:41Crimson_Tide915

hey Im back and i have another poem also read it tell everyone lol...great poem by the way I like it

April 9, 2007 21:08Lindsay

NOt all poems should end with a happy ending!!! I don't care if you like the poem or not, but i don't believe that content can make a poem bad or good that is all opinion....so what makes the poem bad???

August 28, 2007 07:25*~*~Carrie~*~*

Really good. Keep submitting your poems. I would like yo read more of your work.