deep blue emotions

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By a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.

drown in her eyes and leave me alone fall to your demise but id like to know why youve chosen her while i am standing here and dont want you to go! looks of regret and drops of tears screams of pain and signs of fear thats all ive got left to keep me sane i wont have to worry anymore no thoughts about yuo left to remember youve walked away now lost in the blue

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April 2, 2007 00:22Lil'Fighter

Brilliant! I love this poem. Thanks for your comments to my poems.

April 8, 2007 01:37FarmGirl

GREAT!

July 26, 2007 18:01 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

this poem reads like a sound resolve in taking your life back. Good job! Glo

bye the way the blue is me its about the one i fell in love with fell in love with the other me the face i put out there to other people the face that hides who i realy am and i was afraid if i showed him the real me he wouldnt love me.

August 25, 2007 02:42ashleyfickle

omg!!!!! sylver i love you!!!! u inspeir me to keep writting!!!! you are so good!!!!! i love you and always will!!!!!!

September 26, 2007 15:56User

I love this one!

December 1, 2007 00:48.:side:walk:.

Beautiful poem! Very genious and gentle.

September 16, 2008 16:38Destinee Amber Kohlman

Wow! This is really awesome...