cry, by a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad. Subscribe to rss feed for a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.

there once was  a girl 
she cried
from her left eye
it signified that she cried
for her mother 
the pain of loss
and the pain of her pain
the fear of it never being the same
there once was a boy 
who cried 
from his right eye
it signified when he cried
for his father
the faith lost 
the hatrid burning
and staying away at all cost
he cant get close 
he cant cry for any other
you see they never cried
from there other eyes 
the girl for the mother 
the boy for the father
she never cried again 
after her mothers death
the girl asked god 
why she couldnt be normal
cry from
her right eye
god has no answer
the boy see he doesnt mind
hes tough strong 
not supposed to crack under presure
or do wrong
he asks god nothing 
he doesnt cry 
just because his father 
never tried 
but the boy comes across a girl
he doesnt see its the girl that will one day
make him cry...
shes happy 
she tells her mother 
when she prays 
shes met this man
and as she prays tells her mother of the happy days she
cries on tear from the left for her mother and one from the
right.....for gods given angel her lover.


PS i know tis is very unfinished and needs lots of change
just give it some serios thought



Posted: 2007-08-30 22:11:36 UTC

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2007-04-05 19:18:13Lil'Fighter
Brilliant! Awesome! I love it! Thanks for the comments.