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By a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.

there once was a girl she cried from her left eye it signified that she cried for her mother the pain of loss and the pain of her pain the fear of it never being the same there once was a boy who cried from his right eye it signified when he cried for his father the faith lost the hatrid burning and staying away at all cost he cant get close he cant cry for any other you see they never cried from there other eyes the girl for the mother the boy for the father she never cried again after her mothers death the girl asked god why she couldnt be normal cry from her right eye god has no answer the boy see he doesnt mind hes tough strong not supposed to crack under presure or do wrong he asks god nothing he doesnt cry just because his father never tried but the boy comes across a girl he doesnt see its the girl that will one day make him cry... shes happy she tells her mother when she prays shes met this man and as she prays tells her mother of the happy days she cries on tear from the left for her mother and one from the right.....for gods given angel her lover. PS i know tis is very unfinished and needs lots of change just give it some serios thought

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April 5, 2007 19:18Lil'Fighter

Brilliant! Awesome! I love it! Thanks for the comments.