Make It Count! (10)

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By Angel of Music

If you were to die today, What would people say? Did you give God the glory? what would they say about your life story? If you were to die tomorrow, what kind of trail would you leave for people to follow? A trail of sin and worldly pleasures? or a trail that leads to heavenly treasures? Does your life reflect the God that you serve? what does your life mean to the people who observe? A life lived for God or a life lived for you? A life full of lies? or a life full of truth? Like a warm breath of air on a cold winters night, You do not have long to shine your light, So before your time on this earth has run out, Make you life matter, Make your life count!

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April 18, 2007 00:48Angel of Music

This poem was truly inspired! Thank you to Pastor Watkins! even though I know he will never read this. Please think! If you were to die today what would people find??? would you be proud of it??? if you would not be proud of it than maybe it shouldnt be part of your life in the first place. God Bless you all! - Amanda

April 29, 2007 00:43 *****Junior Walker*****

ye nice concept,lifes really short wen u think about it,schools like a fifth of your life,then the time you spend at work leaves just a short while to enjoy what you can,next thing you know your collecting your pension

May 17, 2007 18:48Chuck Shorter

Terrific poem!

May 19, 2007 04:42THE ELIZABETHs

thats cool. me and my cousins are like totally live each day as if it were your last. God's pretty awesome too. cause He like created us and stuff. oh btw you might want to shorten your information. it's kind of long and it makes people not want to read it. =] kisskisskiss THE ELIZABETHs

May 26, 2007 19:43mytruth

Wow, this poem gave me chills!!! I just love it. Wonderful job. You are so talented.

July 31, 2007 21:23Lydia

This is really good...you have a talent for writing encouraging poems! Thanks for your comment by the way.

September 9, 2007 01:03-fruit-loop-

the Elizabeths,.,.,. would you like her to shorten her poems.,., also

April 5, 2008 02:07connie

Nice poem I don't believe in God but it makes you think about stuff

November 28, 2008 01:51Felicia

very well done Amanda ...your poems always inspire me when I'm down to the lowest love in Christ. Felicia Mac

June 15, 2010 22:43~**AGE_TEA**~

i like your poems. luv the way u use rhym'ins too. great work!