Broken

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By A Lonely Song •

Hold them in Hold them in Keep it all tight inside Don't let anyone know those thoughts and feelings you hide Don't dare show them the scars The scars from pain, abuse, and self-mutilation The scars from living a life of nothing Uncontrolable thoughts led you to be this way Uncontrolable emotions keeping you at the same place Hold them in Hold them in Don't let anyone see you've become Broken

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May 2, 2007 01:44 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

sad but a beautiful message of brokeness. You know Courtney, Christ is a master potter, He is able to remake and mold broken things and people. God bless you! great poem!

May 5, 2007 21:14 *****Junior Walker*****

hey dont think i got your add you know,if so i cant find you,comment me if i did add you without realising,or leave me your addy and i'll add you,powerful poem you got here

May 28, 2007 02:44mytruth

It's amazing how many poems I've read on this site that describe that feeling of being alone and hiding our feelings, but we don't hide them on paper. Poets are the creators of silence. Keep writing, this is a powerful poem..