a new day...., by lost the lonely dead
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halls of the dead
pathes of rot
the ora of fear hangs thick
hope seems far off
and it is there
a the sun struggles
to make an appearance
maybe it will succeed at last |
Posted: 2007-05-05 23:02:44 UTC |
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2007-06-03 15:22:56 | Loneliness is condescending |
i dont know if this is new or not but i like the shortness of it some times i think poems get to long and i cant read them all the way. |
2007-06-10 00:39:27 | mytruth |
interesting. very descriptive. |
2007-06-11 17:08:36 | lost the lonely dead |
i wanted to write but i didnt know what to really say so it stayed short and i dont want to change it |