Why Mom, by Teresa
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You yell
you scream
you call me names
I don't understand why you do this to me
it feels like im nothing to you
even though you say you love me and would never take me
back
to me it seems like you wish I was never around
and when I need a sholder to cry on i have no one
my friends don't understand why you treat me this way
im dying inside even thoghu you can't tell
because ive learned to keep it in so you don't see my
weakness and use it against me
even though
you yell
you scream
you call me names
i don't understand mom
i thought you loved me why do you try to put me down and
hurt me with your words? |
Posted: 2009-03-14 22:43:42 UTC |
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2007-05-26 03:07:20 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
I feel it! You acomplished the job in writing this poem...emotions are very touching, such a sad poem though. always if this were a true poem for you..remember you are loved! great job! |
2007-05-26 21:32:42 | mytruth |
Ironically, I feel this way about my mother. |
2007-05-30 20:32:14 | mytruth |
Teresa, it may not get better, but it may get easier to deal with as you get older. Unfortunately, the only way we will learn is to walk thru this. |
2007-05-31 16:37:42 | Teresa |
mytruth I understand that but thanx anyways
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2007-06-21 15:17:48 | Felicia |
really good Felicia Mac |
2007-11-21 04:19:54 | Firec |
very deep.. the emotions shine through great job!
please read some of my work as well :] |
2008-02-09 07:38:35 | KristenAlger |
my mom is the same way...
but she yells so much she tells me to get out of her house...
then she calls childrens aid and freaks...
i finally got used to it...
but i dont think anyone should get used to it....
i love this one :) |