Why Mom

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By Teresa •

You yell you scream you call me names I don't understand why you do this to me it feels like im nothing to you even though you say you love me and would never take me back to me it seems like you wish I was never around and when I need a sholder to cry on i have no one my friends don't understand why you treat me this way im dying inside even thoghu you can't tell because ive learned to keep it in so you don't see my weakness and use it against me even though you yell you scream you call me names i don't understand mom i thought you loved me why do you try to put me down and hurt me with your words?

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May 22, 2007 20:26Angel of Music

Great job!!!

May 26, 2007 03:07 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I feel it! You acomplished the job in writing this poem...emotions are very touching, such a sad poem though. always if this were a true poem for you..remember you are loved! great job!

May 26, 2007 21:32mytruth

Ironically, I feel this way about my mother.

May 30, 2007 20:32mytruth

Teresa, it may not get better, but it may get easier to deal with as you get older. Unfortunately, the only way we will learn is to walk thru this.

May 31, 2007 16:37Teresa

mytruth I understand that but thanx anyways

June 21, 2007 15:17Felicia

really good Felicia Mac

November 21, 2007 04:19Firec

very deep.. the emotions shine through great job!

please read some of my work as well :]

February 9, 2008 07:38KristenAlger

my mom is the same way...
but she yells so much she tells me to get out of her house...
then she calls childrens aid and freaks...
i finally got used to it...
but i dont think anyone should get used to it....
i love this one :)