Encounter in Eden

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By Chuck Shorter •

WHILST SERPENTINE SATAN SIPS EVE'S EAGER ENCHANTING LIPS DOTH BLIND ADAM ARDENTLY AWAIT THE TENDER TOUCH OF HIS MATE FRESH FORBIDDEN FRUIT FOR ADAM PRE-BITTEN BY BEAUTIFUL MADAM TEMPTED TO TASTE IT HE ATE SO SURELY SEALING HIS FATE AND ADAM ADMITTED SADLY THAT HIS LADY LOVED LUCIFER MADLY THUS ENDETH THIS ROMANTIC TALE OF ADAM,EVE AND A "DEVILISH" MALE CHUCK SHORTER

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May 17, 2007 02:19Angel of Music

Very good I really enjoyed it!

June 22, 2007 14:49 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Short,sweet and to the point! a subject that has been ripped,torn, and researched since that fateful day! very well written with a hint of devilsh seeping through it's text/content. :)glostarg

January 19, 2008 06:25Sheila

Very well put!

January 4, 2010 19:33Angel of Music

Chuck, Hello friend! Once again I must say how much I enjoyed this poem! you truly are a wonderful writer! I have some new poetry that I would love for you to read and comment on. "Close to my Heart" and "Treasured Moments". Looking forward to hearing from you again. *~*The Angel of Music*~*Amanda*~*

October 10, 2010 04:55twisted bean

like it v much