TRANSITION, by Chuck Shorter
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1.FROM INNOCENCE
2.TO IMMORALITY
3.FROM CINDERELLA
4.TO CRUELLA DE VIL
5.FROM APPLE STRUDLES
6.TO AMPHETAMINES
7.FROM RATIONALITY
8.TO RECKLESSNESS
9.FROM LOVE
10.TO LUST
11.FROM TRUST
12.TO TREACHERY
13.FROM MERCIFUL
14.TO MALIGNANT
15.FROM DIVINE
16.TO DEVILISH
17.FROM ADOLESCENCE
18.TO ADULTHOOD
Chuck Shorter |
| Posted: 2017-08-15 10:27:31 UTC |
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| 2007-06-22 14:56:04 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
| all in all this poem transition wraps the se of life in 18 steps to maturity, but individualality has many more stepping stones, all well accepted to those with a desire for writting the history of the descent of man/womankind.
short work/good job!
glostarg |
| 2007-11-28 17:59:42 | Angel of Music |
| Hey Chuck! this was one of the few poems that I havn't commented twice on, so I though I would just drop you a quick comment here to say hi! I hope that we can read some new work from you soon... Maybe???? lol. I love this poem, I have seen some of these transitions happen in my freinds, so interesting how you captured it in words. If you have time I would appreciate your feed back on some of my work that you havn't seen yet, I think I have three of them... God bless you and have a wonderful day. Amanda |