TRANSITION

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By Chuck Shorter •

1.FROM INNOCENCE 2.TO IMMORALITY 3.FROM CINDERELLA 4.TO CRUELLA DE VIL 5.FROM APPLE STRUDLES 6.TO AMPHETAMINES 7.FROM RATIONALITY 8.TO RECKLESSNESS 9.FROM LOVE 10.TO LUST 11.FROM TRUST 12.TO TREACHERY 13.FROM MERCIFUL 14.TO MALIGNANT 15.FROM DIVINE 16.TO DEVILISH 17.FROM ADOLESCENCE 18.TO ADULTHOOD Chuck Shorter

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May 17, 2007 02:18Angel of Music

interesting! and very good

June 22, 2007 14:56 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

all in all this poem transition wraps the se of life in 18 steps to maturity, but individualality has many more stepping stones, all well accepted to those with a desire for writting the history of the descent of man/womankind.
short work/good job!
glostarg

November 28, 2007 17:59Angel of Music

Hey Chuck! this was one of the few poems that I havn't commented twice on, so I though I would just drop you a quick comment here to say hi! I hope that we can read some new work from you soon... Maybe???? lol. I love this poem, I have seen some of these transitions happen in my freinds, so interesting how you captured it in words. If you have time I would appreciate your feed back on some of my work that you havn't seen yet, I think I have three of them... God bless you and have a wonderful day. Amanda