Abandoned Undead

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By lost the lonely dead •

Everyday you stumble about All the while wind-tossed Never quite dead And never really alive The creature of demise You wish only to be fully dead And yet you already are You cling to this fake facade Masquerading your perfection Bitter selfishness abandons you You set yourself up for failure I tried to warn you I was your friend You pushed me away and I will go Returning only to pay respects

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May 15, 2007 23:12Angel of Music

great job ;)

May 16, 2007 22:02lost the lonely dead

i say it needs work thats what i say but if you like it then i guess thats ok

May 17, 2007 23:22. QUEENIE .

this is really really good

June 3, 2007 15:42Loneliness is condescending

so in another time and another life i gave you an anwser. i dont know if i should do this or if it will one day fall into your lap but i'm way to tired to think of what i should do now

June 11, 2007 17:07lost the lonely dead

thanks for your comments...it was just something i wrote and i dont think i'll find answers to most of the things that bother me so eventually i suppose ill just have to give them up