LOVE SONG, by Chuck Shorter Subscribe to rss feed for Chuck Shorter 

SWELTERING,SUMMER MORNINGS,
DRAB,DREARY AFTERNOONS,
LONELY,LOVELESS NIGHTS,
DAYS OF ENDLESS ENNUI,
MONTHS OF TIRESOME TOIL,
YEARS OF HOPELESS HARDSHIP.  
THESE JUST SEEMED A FLEETING INSTANT 
THE DAY YOU STOOD BEFORE ME;
LOVELY,
ALLURING,
DELICATE,
YOUTHFUL.
MY HEART HAMMERS
MY PULSE POUNDS.
MY DESIRE DEEPENS.
MY MIND IS FULL OF YOU.
WILL YOU  ALWAYS BE THERE FOR ME? 
ELSE LIKE THOSE OTHER WOMEN,
WILL YOU TOO DRIVE ME BACK;
TO SWELTERING,SUMMER MORNINGS,
DRAB,DREARY AFTERNOONS,
AND LONELY,LOVELESS NIGHTS...?

CHUCK SHORTER
Posted: 2007-05-18 14:43:00 UTC
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2007-05-18 16:28:23Angel of Music
Great! this sounds like it could be a realy good song.

2007-05-22 01:29:57mytruth
Love!

2007-05-31 19:36:45Caitlin_Californication
love it. your work is amazing. i want to talk to you more. let me know if you'd like to talk with me.

2007-07-20 01:48:06Angel of Music
Hey chuck! great to hear from you again! I am sorry but I am not aloud to email ppl that I meet on here... but thanks anyway for your comments I will be checking back soon to look at some of your new work. if you want to you can read my blog at http://www.homeschoolblogger.com/poetichugs well I have to go. talk at you later, Amanda

2007-08-22 04:34:50 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
I like this poem! It's visual to me seems to have a sandwich effect :) Thank you Chuck for all of you comments on my poetry, especially "King Canard",It's very encouraging for me. I have been somewhat discouraged lately and your words helped much. If you have time read my poem" War and Peace". Thank you! love Glo