human hamster wheel, by mytruth
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Tell me about these
viscious cycles
I put myself thru.
I turn 'round and 'round and 'round...
Tell me why
it doesn't feel
comfortable
anymore.
Tell me why
it hurts.
Show me the way out.
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Posted: 2007-05-21 07:59:35 UTC |
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2007-05-21 16:58:13 | Angel of Music |
Great job I really love the emotion that you put into this poem! |
2007-08-27 17:21:45 | Lydia |
again fantastic work. |
2009-05-16 18:23:50 | ... |
This is great, so simple but it portrays emotion brilliantly! |