Cold, by mytruth |
All I feel is so lonely when you're not around. And lately, the room feels empty when you're next to me. I can't see through this cloud you put me in. |
Posted: 2007-05-21 08:40:38 UTC |
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2007-05-21 17:00:38 | Angel of Music |
good job! |
2007-05-25 11:17:30 | Chuck Shorter |
You are definitely one of the most talenented poets I've seen. The lines are short,but the feel really slams ya in the gut. Outstandin' piece of work Chuck |