Michael (RIP- 98), by mytruth
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In a minute
I could be you
I could be floating
in the wind
and rain
and in the heavens.
I wonder if you can hear me
when I say your name
or when I cry.
I seems I am torn
between worlds...
...what I know
and
what is real.
Please,
rescue me.
All I know is you. |
| Posted: 2007-05-27 00:12:37 UTC |
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| 2007-05-21 17:01:23 | Angel of Music |
| wow this is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it! keep up the great work! |
| 2007-05-25 11:31:13 | Chuck Shorter |
| It's nice tto come across a poet with atender heart and a true feel for love. Great work!
Chuck |
| 2007-08-08 09:09:13 | debbie |
| what a good soul you have,heartfelt.
Thankyou for your comments on my work, kind regards debbie |
| 2007-09-08 06:31:29 | amroth |
| Thank you for the comments, very nice poem...I can definitely relate to this as I have lost the love of my life also this summer :( If you get a chance...read my poem Monsindra's Ballad , it's about that. |
| 2008-01-11 23:30:06 | Sheila |
| When we lose someone we truly love.I don't know think we ever get over it.We just learn to live with it. I can't believe no one has rated this poem. |