Michael (RIP- 98)

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By mytruth

In a minute I could be you I could be floating in the wind and rain and in the heavens. I wonder if you can hear me when I say your name or when I cry. I seems I am torn between worlds... ...what I know and what is real. Please, rescue me. All I know is you.

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May 21, 2007 17:01Angel of Music

wow this is beautiful! I really enjoyed reading it! keep up the great work!

May 25, 2007 11:31Chuck Shorter

It's nice tto come across a poet with atender heart and a true feel for love. Great work!
Chuck

August 8, 2007 09:09debbie

what a good soul you have,heartfelt.
Thankyou for your comments on my work, kind regards debbie

September 8, 2007 06:31amroth

Thank you for the comments, very nice poem...I can definitely relate to this as I have lost the love of my life also this summer :( If you get a chance...read my poem Monsindra's Ballad , it's about that.

January 11, 2008 23:30Sheila

When we lose someone we truly love.I don't know think we ever get over it.We just learn to live with it. I can't believe no one has rated this poem.