the moon, by mytruth
|
the moon so bright
tonight
just look
it stares at me
for what?
I wonder
does it judge me, too?
I notice how full its
eyes look tonight
it must be full of thoughts
sitting up there
every night
alone.
but who cares to notice?
it's shining brightly
no worry about the moon
tonight
or
any other night.
but all it does is sit
in darkess
all it has time to do
is think
or
wonder
or imagine
what it would be like to
be somewhere else
or
to be somewhere where everything is
naturally
caring
to be noticed for something
other than how beautiful
it shines.
there's more to brightness
to know about a moon. |
Posted: 2007-08-24 00:27:49 UTC |
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2007-11-13 19:09:10 | Angel of Music |
so beautiful, just like its subject.... I love to just look @ the moon. YOu truly did a beautiful thing with words here. Keep up the amazing work! |
2007-12-23 08:54:42 | Simply-Me-20104 |
WOW!! This is amazing!! I absolutely LOVE the format of this poem... the flow of it.. the meaning... the wonder... It's GREAT!! |