the moon

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By mytruth

the moon so bright tonight just look it stares at me for what? I wonder does it judge me, too? I notice how full its eyes look tonight it must be full of thoughts sitting up there every night alone. but who cares to notice? it's shining brightly no worry about the moon tonight or any other night. but all it does is sit in darkess all it has time to do is think or wonder or imagine what it would be like to be somewhere else or to be somewhere where everything is naturally caring to be noticed for something other than how beautiful it shines. there's more to brightness to know about a moon.

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November 13, 2007 19:09Angel of Music

so beautiful, just like its subject.... I love to just look @ the moon. YOu truly did a beautiful thing with words here. Keep up the amazing work!

December 23, 2007 08:54Simply-Me-20104

WOW!! This is amazing!! I absolutely LOVE the format of this poem... the flow of it.. the meaning... the wonder... It's GREAT!!