Silent Tears, by J-Hood
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Have you ever heard a silent tear?
They come from love an pain and also fear
There are no witness's to this act
And silent tears you can't hold back
It only happens when your alone
No whining no begging not the slightist moan
The tear drops they fall not from your eyes
But deep in your soul is where they hide
For no one to see and no one to hear
You endure these yourself these silent tears
Happiness, joy, heartache, and sorrow
These things are promised when love is borrowed
So many thoughts run through my mind
Is our love on borrowed time?
Is this the begining or the end?
Will we remain lovers or simply friends?
Will this continue between you and i?
Or will you find some other guy?
Will this last or will this fail?
With me locked up in this jail?
Our hopes and dreams will they reign true?
Or will i end up losing you
These are my thoughts, feelings, and fears
And now you've heard a silent tear
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Posted: 2007-07-27 21:19:27 UTC |
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2007-06-12 06:51:33 | Darkest Star |
i like this i can relate to this. very well written |
2007-06-20 08:30:04 | User |
Well written and full of emotions too..good one..!! |
2007-07-23 20:25:12 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
Such an awesome, beautiful poem!!!!I have mentioned one or two things that you might want to fix to make this a perfect poem(in my sight) for what ever that would be worth to you... :)I loved this poem!
Is(are) love on borrowed time?
this word in parentheses will have more meaning, if you change the spelling to "our" if that is what was intended in your writing. also one other mispelled word in this line:
Our hopes and dreams will they (rein)true?
rein/reign
overall this is a beautiful poem! You know where that silent tear lives, don't you? If you didn't you could never have homed in on it's locality.
One other thing I will say about this poem, It must reside near the "heart of God", because "Tears are a Language that God understands".
God Bless You! love Glo
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2007-09-24 18:13:04 | Lydia |
this is truly good work |