Silent Tears

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By J-Hood •

Have you ever heard a silent tear? They come from love an pain and also fear There are no witness's to this act And silent tears you can't hold back It only happens when your alone No whining no begging not the slightist moan The tear drops they fall not from your eyes But deep in your soul is where they hide For no one to see and no one to hear You endure these yourself these silent tears Happiness, joy, heartache, and sorrow These things are promised when love is borrowed So many thoughts run through my mind Is our love on borrowed time? Is this the begining or the end? Will we remain lovers or simply friends? Will this continue between you and i? Or will you find some other guy? Will this last or will this fail? With me locked up in this jail? Our hopes and dreams will they reign true? Or will i end up losing you These are my thoughts, feelings, and fears And now you've heard a silent tear

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June 12, 2007 06:51Darkest Star

i like this i can relate to this. very well written

June 20, 2007 05:38^*~-S0uL-*-ChYld-~*^

i know exactly wat you mean! i love this poem

June 20, 2007 08:30User

Well written and full of emotions too..good one..!!

July 23, 2007 20:25 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Such an awesome, beautiful poem!!!!I have mentioned one or two things that you might want to fix to make this a perfect poem(in my sight) for what ever that would be worth to you... :)I loved this poem!
Is(are) love on borrowed time?
this word in parentheses will have more meaning, if you change the spelling to "our" if that is what was intended in your writing. also one other mispelled word in this line:
Our hopes and dreams will they (rein)true?
rein/reign
overall this is a beautiful poem! You know where that silent tear lives, don't you? If you didn't you could never have homed in on it's locality.
One other thing I will say about this poem, It must reside near the "heart of God", because "Tears are a Language that God understands".
God Bless You! love Glo

July 26, 2007 00:38a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.

another wow i like the way you write

September 24, 2007 18:13Lydia

this is truly good work