Faith

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By J-Hood •

I feel like im trapped in a realm of fate I have the key but can't escape The harder i try an turn the key The more the key wants to turn me I twist and prod to no avail I cannot exit this prison cell Bars of iron i built myself I put me here with no ones help So on this night i sit an pray Lord how much longer must i stay In this realm of no return Where kind and caring all get burned And all that's left is anger an rage And me locked up in this cage (LORD) Im listening son to what you say You simply truned thee wrong way The lock is your soul the key is me Open up your heart and you will be free (ME) So all this time i had the key! But chose a life of misery ! Im listening now to what you say And turning lord thee other way

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July 23, 2007 20:54 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I wanted to note a couple of mispelled words, but other than that this poem is filled with heartfelt emotion and sorrow. I think sometimes one will never see the KEY as you have so elegantly written, until we are faced with our own self, that's when the Tuff get going and make that change permanent!
I think there is scripture for this as well. it seems like it is found in the bible under Phillipians 4:19 but i may be wrong about the where abouts of it, but it says: I can do all things through Christ whic strengthens me! YES! We can! :) Love Glo

July 23, 2007 21:10 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I don't want to just send you spelling corrections or make you feel I am not reading your poetry right; I do feel that you are a very good writer of poetry, and you stress the emotional part of your words and writing to reach out and grab the heart of the reader. This is excellent writing gifts which you have. Care for them well! God Bless You! Love Glo

The more the key wants to turn me
I twist and prod to no (avil/- AVAIL.)Lord how much longer must i stay
In this (relm) of no return-
(realm)

And all (thst's)left is anger an rage -that's








July 23, 2007 21:12 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I don't want to just send you spelling corrections or make you feel I am not reading your poetry right; I do feel that you are a very good writer of poetry, and you stress the emotional part of your words and writing to reach out and grab the heart of the reader. This is excellent writing gifts which you have. Care for them well! God Bless You! Love Glo

The more the key wants to turn me
I twist and prod to no (avil/- AVAIL.)Lord how much longer must i stay
In this (relm) of no return-
(realm)

And all (thst's)left is anger an rage -that's








July 23, 2007 21:15 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

sorry aabout the double/triple entries.glo

July 26, 2007 00:40a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad.

hmm so what you have some typos this is one of my favorite it shows you have faith i have lost mine and tend not to write on the subjuect but i think this one is the best