Sun and Moon

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By destiny_light

When I think of the sun, I think of all the hope I lost The shadow that is forever cast upon my face My once bright blue eyes are now full of tears I thought you were always going to be there for me But you are to busy with everthing that is more important I thought I was the most important thing in your life I'm sorry if I'm coming on strongly, but I was thrown down So hard that I can still feel the ground against my face I can still see the wet tears on the floor When I looked up at you and saw you laughing at me I think it is sad when you look at me And realise what you have done to me and my look at life I think it is sad when you call me and don't say a word When I think of the moon, I think of a new begining And how I will live the rest of my life You will be happy to know I already figured out half of it The thing that will make me happier then anything And that is a life without you

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June 25, 2007 11:03mimi

i really undrstood this poem its great

June 26, 2007 17:58destiny_light

thanks

July 3, 2007 02:30DarkEnvy

I really fell this poem, very good.

July 6, 2007 05:44Lil'Fighter

I love it! Great Job!:)

July 18, 2007 21:17THE ELIZABETHs

so powerful... reminds me so much of our poem "on my bed". I'm giving you a nine!