What He Told Me

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By thesexygreenmnm

he said, as he wiped the tears out of my eyes that everything will be ok he promised me that things would work out and i smiled and said thanks. he said, as i wiped the tears out of my eyes that i can't keep thinking about this he promised me that he'd be there forever and i looked away and said thanks. he said, as we laughed over jokes that he didn't believe in love he promised me that someday i'd understand and i looked through him and said thanks. i tried to wash away the tears tonight let them fall away never to be seen again but old battle wounds were reopened as a few new ones were formed. i saw their effects on my bruised body, holes left where emptiness should never be seen the promises we made were supposed to last through eternity, but i have yet to see them fulfilled. logic knows no bound in the challenges of life - something as simple as the vernacular of us can be mistaken in many different ways. your eyes, though steady, could decieve your wishes and show what you need inside. he said, as we were on the phone that he loved me he promised me that he still cared but i laughed and said yeah right.

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October 11, 2005 21:27 ♥ Break The Tradition

wow thats really good

April 17, 2007 00:25Angel of Music

good job

August 2, 2008 15:25Beth aka Anonymous

i like it :)

January 20, 2009 22:45SMILING DARKNESS

It confused me a bit,
but it almost reminded me of me and my well, was "boyfriend"
mostly the last part too.

This is good

May 24, 2009 02:28hapsoon

this poem is truly amazing and emotional..