fly so delicate heavins new angel

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By a rose by any other name would hurt just as bad. •

during life you'de sing the lyrics so perfectly help with every thing but deep inside your broken down your givin up on you never get what you deserve you had yet to fallen was nothing else perfered? and your face showed you needed help but no one can help now can they? can they ever see it was never okay well now its to late you didnt have help running you were caught by fate screaming for help After death all thats left is a gravestone and a dead heart full of hate your despair had shown if only people could tell but they gave heavin a new Angel

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July 26, 2007 17:48 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Your form here is very good, transitional even. the storyline in this poem is so sad, but a very good message comes across for me anyway. It's like we can spend our whole life in hate or self pity and at the end all we have is an empty heart full of hate... I don't know about anyone else but that is not how I want to leave this life. Real "Love" is my path, and I hope it's contagious.I like this poem good one, it's publish worthy. Luv Glo

July 27, 2007 21:43J-Hood

hey serenity i looked through your list of poetry but could not find the one you call wrath you asked me to read this work saying my (im done) poem fit with it in ways if i over looked it im sorry if not please let me know where to find it