Across the light of breath

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By .:side:walk:. •

I don't know how to think my preception is so dark and grey I dont know the right way watching the water go down the sink those words are flat out infront can't notice anything else life is just a stunt might not be false walking up to a low view facing towards me this isn't anything new the dark shadow is what I see one deep breathe brings me up to see the light it lifts my feet off the sullen ground now I'm not in sight twirling around feeling fine then comes the exhale on the dusty ground feeling cold back down to my shadow the darkness casts again © since 2007 - 2008 and present

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July 14, 2007 05:03 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

your message comes through so well! It is so hard to live life when we just don't know the right way. One thing I liked about this poem though, is that it plays on breath. Breath was given to all and the creator inspires life , poetry, happiness, joy, breathing,love. You have done well in this poem! I like it very much! glo

July 22, 2007 01:31.:side:walk:.

Thank you!