all that glitters

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By liberty moon

to be on the inside but actually on the outside to be whole and yet so broken to be walking, talking but actually dead but all that glitters isn't gold everybody is around, but nobody is near there hands on mine yet in their eyes i am frozen everybody cares but nobody hears but all that glitters isn't gold silently i am screaming and on the inside you hear me then on the outside they say you don't hear me but that glitters isn't gold

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August 12, 2007 20:34beautyisinside

Yeah I think the same thing. Everyone sometimes thinks everything is perfect but on the inside it doesn't seem like that.

August 21, 2007 19:37Caitlin_Californication

i really like it it says a lot about how people really are inside and out

October 2, 2007 03:41User

Wow...a good poem and I like the way it can be related to everyone and its like you are expressing what many others wanted to in real life! Great job!