Why I feel

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By morbid angel

I dont know why I feel an urge to kill, a desire to thrill. While my world crashes down all around me now. I was once an angel with darkened wings I broke my word, I killed all dreams. But nobody there forgave of all the horrible sins. So now im a victim of preconception a true damnation holding within wracked with splinter of all my wicked immoralation I'm out in the world I can no longer see with twisting emotions chaotic commotions of longing for that person I use to think as me. morbid angel

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April 24, 2005 17:04abs

wow this poem is cool, not usually a mogin poem kinda-people but this one really is great.

May 31, 2005 06:32xXJoshXx

All I can possible find to say after reading this poem is WOW.

November 11, 2005 00:38~JaLeEsA lOvEs PoLkA dOtS~

Very nice...keep up the good work!

January 7, 2006 03:41a rose by any otha name

the concept is original but it expresses such a covered theme, the losing of one's self, job well done

August 16, 2006 02:18Liberty or Death

Wow... I really like your poem! I thought it was deep and expressed in an origional way.

December 19, 2006 12:41~ Gemz ~

very good. keep writing! =]

February 1, 2009 20:28sweetNsour

hmmmm