The Little Girl, by |
The little girl looks up at me, She smiles, eyes glistening like the sea, Who can hurt this innocent child? Whose thoughts are gentle, here words are mild, She doesn't understand what's going on, She doesn't know what he's done, She knows what happens feel so wrong, She's hid her feelings for so long, But she's hurting still inside, She needs someone in whom she'll confide, Her feelings are out of control they're wild, She locks up her inner child, Blaming herself for all he did, Even though she's just a kid, She runs away and hides herself, Puts her childhood on the shelf. Goodbye little girl Copyright Kirsty Hatten |
Posted: 2007-09-06 22:43:37 UTC |
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2007-09-06 23:18:52 | ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ |
Kirsty this is a beautiful poem. It's sad but it tells a story of a little girl who was abused. It tells the story of guilt which does not belong to the little girl, Yet , she is holding that guilt as if she were worthy of guilt and pain. Great Job! Love your big sis Glo |
2007-10-12 02:08:43 | Teresa |
wow this was great because you showed that just because shes a little girlshes been through a lot even though she seems so inocent Teresa |
2007-10-22 15:13:12 | MissBeckyBoob |
one word wow |
2007-12-26 07:07:33 | Simply-Me-20104 |
Wow!! This almost made me cry!! This is such an amazing and expressive and SUCH a powerful poem!!! I give you great kudos for this accomplishment! It's just amazing! |
2009-04-13 23:31:34 | ... |
Omg, this is amazing,so powerful emotionally, so sad, but just beautiful, Wow... |
2015-12-21 20:29:13 | Jasper K |
This is very haunting and easily paints a sad image |