What's the Point (4), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
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What's the point
of living in Love?
There's too much hurt
and pain in this glove.
I feel I am choking.
I want to break free
but others to consider
So I just can't be me!
Give me one good reason
why this love should grow
Tell me friend
for surely you'll know!
I've heard many a reference
on the positive side
yet who to believe...
Is this all a horrid lie?
What's the point of Love,
before I go?
Is it a fire...
to try the soul?
© Copyright 2007 glostarg |
Posted: 2008-04-22 22:18:36 UTC |
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2007-10-04 19:04:50 | Angel of Music |
wow! this is beautiful! I could really feel the emotion in it! Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to read more! Amanda |
2007-10-15 07:51:19 | xbeautifully_brokenx |
I'm loving this poem Gloria. Thanks for your comments on my poems, the little girl i suppose is me............even more so now.......i dunno...i love u big sis..xxx |
2007-12-26 06:52:33 | Simply-Me-20104 |
I admire your work SO much! You are so wonderful! Your words have such power behind them! I love this poem, and I can completely relate! Thank you for sharing this wonderful work with us!! I hope you had a Merry Christmas!! |