What's the Point (4)

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By <font color= "white"> ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

What's the point of living in Love? There's too much hurt and pain in this glove. I feel I am choking. I want to break free but others to consider So I just can't be me! Give me one good reason why this love should grow Tell me friend for surely you'll know! I've heard many a reference on the positive side yet who to believe... Is this all a horrid lie? What's the point of Love, before I go? Is it a fire... to try the soul? © Copyright 2007 glostarg

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October 4, 2007 19:04Angel of Music

wow! this is beautiful! I could really feel the emotion in it! Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to read more! Amanda

October 15, 2007 07:51 xbeautifully_brokenx

I'm loving this poem Gloria. Thanks for your comments on my poems, the little girl i suppose is me............even more so now.......i dunno...i love u big sis..xxx

December 26, 2007 06:52Simply-Me-20104

I admire your work SO much! You are so wonderful! Your words have such power behind them! I love this poem, and I can completely relate! Thank you for sharing this wonderful work with us!! I hope you had a Merry Christmas!!

January 20, 2008 04:08 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Just_Chelsea20104 yes! thank you! Glo