What's the Point (4), by ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ Subscribe to rss feed for <font color= ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~ ">

What's the point

of living in Love?

There's too much hurt 

and pain in this glove.


I feel I am choking. 

I want to break free

but others to consider

So I just can't be me!



Give me one good reason 

why this love should grow

Tell me friend 

for surely you'll know!


I've heard many a reference

on the positive side

yet who to believe...

Is this all a horrid lie?


What's the point of Love,

before I go?

Is it a fire...
 
to try the soul?

© Copyright 2007 glostarg
Posted: 2008-04-22 22:18:36 UTC

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2007-10-04 19:04:50Angel of Music
wow! this is beautiful! I could really feel the emotion in it! Keep up the amazing work! I can't wait to read more! Amanda

2007-10-15 07:51:19 xbeautifully_brokenx
I'm loving this poem Gloria. Thanks for your comments on my poems, the little girl i suppose is me............even more so now.......i dunno...i love u big sis..xxx

2007-12-26 06:52:33Simply-Me-20104
I admire your work SO much! You are so wonderful! Your words have such power behind them! I love this poem, and I can completely relate! Thank you for sharing this wonderful work with us!! I hope you had a Merry Christmas!!

2008-01-20 04:08:18 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~
Just_Chelsea20104 yes! thank you! Glo