Mental Confect

RSS

By Felicia

Scarcely morning and the dawn breaks bringing a bitter world of hate upon the wings of the dead the pain of this abrupts her thoughts The very reality of her mental confect frees her from the awkward remembrance of things past tormented thoughts and disturbed dreams cloud together and form a vision of death The day is hot but her heart beats cold her mouth speaks words of uncomely death and her mind is a maze of doom in the deep dark valley she lies Felicia Mac

Current vote: 9.0 / 5

To vote, you must be logged in.

To leave comments, you must be logged in.

November 4, 2007 02:19Teresa

Great job
Teresa Nutter

February 26, 2008 15:07User

Seems like we feel the same most of the time, I can feel it from the way you write..

May 16, 2008 16:04Simply-Me-20104

Wow! Your poems are so powerful and I totally admire your word usage!!! Thanks for the comment, and yes, my poems have accumulated over a number of years!! Don't worry, you'll get there!! Few GREAT poems is much better than a number of "less good" ones(sorry, couldn't think of the right word?? haha) But you're doing great and you are an awesome writer!!!