"Escape"

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By StupidLoserPerson

Your poor melancholy soul Is spinning slowly out of control But with the music screaming into your ears You know you've found an escape Your poor hideous life You try to drown yourself in blood and hide And with the pain you cause for you as you slit your wrists You think you've found an escape Your poor rejected heart Because they've left you, you've fallen apart You let what they did bring you down You search for an escape Your poor depressed mind Their words, they hurt you, bitter and unkind You think you've nothing to live for Now you have no escape Because once you've let them take over you I'm sorry to say this but you're through There's nothing left for me to do You'll hurt yourself by killing you And once you have decided to You'll take away the most precious thing to you Here you are running from the truth You've hurt yourself by killing you You should've held on You should've found a real escape *My poems/songs are protected by copyright laws on www.studentcenter.org *

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March 28, 2005 17:48lacebutterflies

you are definately not a stupidloserperson if you can write like this.

April 14, 2005 15:06Depressed_des

This is excellent! I gave it the highest mark as it is really interesting and cleverly written! I can relate to it in a way.

this is great

January 2, 2009 11:08LostChild

AWESOME!!!!

August 18, 2010 02:41Craney

Great message for many young people. Come on, your life is not that bad.