I miss you

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By Teresa

I miss you i miss your smile i miss your laugh i miss the fact that you were always there for me even when i didnt treat you the way i should have i miss you talking me out of doing some thing stupid i miss the stories you used to tell me i miss you talking to me i miss venting to you when i got in a fight with my mom i miss you venting to me about you mom too i miss knowing that i would have someone too make my day better i miss the slumber parties i miss telling you about my crushes and you telling me yours i miss your bear hugs and after you gave e a hug you joking by saying hugs not drugs with a serious face than smiles and laughs i miss you telling me that im not the only one with parent problems i miss telling you about my dad and you telling me about yours cuz we never got to see them that often i miss the water fights (i know it sounds childish) i miss the uncontrolible laughter i miss everything about you i miss you so much Olivia I guess what they say is true you dont really know what you have until its gone Please comment i really miss her she was my best friend and i want to know how to improve it thank you Always Teresa

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October 29, 2007 10:34shreya

i just wish it sed more as in it wa longer

April 30, 2009 03:20!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

some spelling problems but its pretty good !!

July 26, 2009 20:1011 Tragedy's

There isn't anything wrong with this, I really like it, I can definitely relate. I think the best ones are the ones that don't rhyme.