behind her blue eye's

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behind hind her blue eyes are tears she's crying deep inside behind her blue eyes is pain so deep it can't be measured it can't be reached behined her blue eye's is sorrow and pain a great deal of stress happiness she won't regain she fears the worst regrets it all behind her blue eyes she has fallen at your door behind her blue eyes she cries every night she is soo scared feels soo much fright she doesn't know what to do she feels too ashamed to turn to you behind her blue eyes is an ocean soo deep she's clinging to a life raft but it's hard to breath behined her blue eyes is sorrow and pain how does she deal how does she gain all the need to stand up and fight she's scared to death morning to night behined her blue eyes is sorrow and pain a time in which she may never regain her past her future her soul her feet her days her nights her darkness and light as time is moving slower and slower she wishes she knew how to deal deal with the shame deal with the pain but behind her blue eyes is a secret a secret or regret of betrayel and fear you were not there she needs you now more than before she fears the end and yet welcomes it dear behined her blue eyes are many tears cried please help her out before she dies

Current vote: 9.0 / 5

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November 23, 2007 20:04destiny_light

Great job, I can totally relate, I loved it YOu get a nine

i love the idea but from your poetry i think you could choose a bettr selection of words with deeper meaning to interest the reader. i still give it a nine though.