A New Life

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By Felicia •

She has a eternal longing for a life of perfection But her all so confused mind extinguishes that thought She feels the weight of the world on her sholders And ramped decisions over come her Pressured by the life of her parents And scared by the reality it holds Makes her cling to the life she knows And forget everything that could be Much older than her years she struggles To find the answers to all life's questions Witch gives her a feeling of disparity And closes the door to a new life Felicia Mac

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November 3, 2007 23:35Angel of Music

Hello Felica! Thank you so much for the very sweet comment you left on my poem. Remember, Christ died for us, the least we can do is stand up for him. In His Love, Angel of music/Amanda

December 14, 2007 22:41SMILING DARKNESS

i think i understand what you mean. its a good poem

January 31, 2008 02:33 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

God Bless You Felicia! Good Poem!

March 9, 2008 23:48Little Miss Meeks

I really can relate to this! It is a very powerful poem!

March 27, 2008 21:01 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

this poem unfortunately depicts how many of us do or have felt in our own lives at one time or another. I believe that many of us seem to try and have perfection when the only perfect one I ever heard of actually walked on water and rose from the grave. I know we should be like that, but one day at a time and one thing at a time , will get us where we need to be. all in the right timing. Peace. Glo