Let Me Die

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By SMILING DARKNESS •

I want to die. Just don't ask me why. Let me forever cry. You think I'm fine, But you don't know. You'll wonder what hurt me so. Don't try to help it. I'm not ment to be. I'm a demon from below. I'm not like you. Everyone always knew. Hell is better than here. I feel it's coming near. I don't write love poems. I write worthless little syllables. Love does'nt exsist in this lifeless dark abyss. The light I do not miss. I make your day turn night. Let me lay here and die. It will make it better. You all know why. So let me lay here, Lay here and die.

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November 7, 2007 01:54User

I am currently going through the same situation so I can totally relate to this poem. Right now, I am still dealing with it and its hard. Most of my new poems are about suicide and yeah....so I can feel it.

November 18, 2007 19:44**The Rose that Blooms from the Heart**

is this how you really feel? trust me, im not saying you nuts at all, im just saying that you are worth a great deal, and you do deserve to live and have a great life. you may feel like your wold is or already has caved in but its going to get better it has to. ive felt this way before ignoring everything and everyone around me. i always told myself that if couldn't possibly get better, but it did, it had to, because thats part of life. there are always going to be ups and downs to it, but thats the way it is. you probably dont even listen to yourself when you look in the mirror and for a milisecond think you're beautiful, i havn't even met you and i think you beautiful because of your poetry. the details are so pure. no im not an online perv, i just want to help you relize that things arn't as bad as they seem, TRUST ME!!!

May 24, 2009 02:33hapsoon

*sob. i can totally relate to this beautiful piece of poetry and many times, i've wanted t die and i have once thought life was hell but hell has no love...or life.