Only as real as a dream, by Kim
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I had already given up, to me it was over. My
head was already lowered, I had already turned my
Shoulder.
I had just begun to move on, my life was turning
around. But then there you were just standing there
and it all came crashing to the ground.
I had built a wall of stenghth and believe me it was
sturdy. I promised myself it would never fall, my
hands were clean and I would never again get them
dirty.
I let my heart turn cold, and decided to let life
take me where it may. But all along my brain was
saying Kim, that just isn't the way.
I couldn't live, I could't breathe, everyday was
like a dream. I convinced myself I was happy, but
every night as I tossed and turned alls I wanted to
was scream.
I know to you this may seem lame, but although it was
you who brought me pain, last night while we talked
and I felt you near, all the sudden the happiness
came.
You looked at me once and just like a song, it all
made sense, this is where I belong. |
Posted: 2005-03-29 20:04:19 UTC |
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2005-04-04 04:28:11 | AndTheTreeWasHappy |
You have a unique ability to convey very real emotions in your poetry. I'd like to see more. I also think that you'd be really good at writing unrhymed poems. Rhyme schemes can be restricting sometimes. |