Only as real as a dream, by Kim Subscribe to rss feed for Kim



      I had already given up, to me it was over.  My
      head was already lowered, I had already turned my 
      Shoulder.

      I had just begun to move on, my life was turning
      around.  But then there you were just standing there
      and it all came crashing to the ground.

      I had built a wall of stenghth and believe me it was
      sturdy.  I promised myself it would never fall, my
      hands were clean and I would never again get them 
      dirty.

      I let my heart turn cold, and decided to let life 
      take me where it may.  But all along my brain was 
      saying Kim, that just isn't the way.

      I couldn't live, I could't breathe, everyday was
      like a dream.  I convinced myself I was happy, but
      every night as I tossed and turned alls I wanted to 
      was scream.

      I know to you this may seem lame, but although it was

      you who brought me pain, last night while we talked
      and I felt you near, all the sudden the happiness 
      came.

      You looked at me once and just like a song, it all
      made sense, this is where I belong.
Posted: 2005-03-29 20:04:19 UTC

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2005-04-04 04:28:11AndTheTreeWasHappy
You have a unique ability to convey very real emotions in your poetry. I'd like to see more. I also think that you'd be really good at writing unrhymed poems. Rhyme schemes can be restricting sometimes.

2008-06-02 05:54:46Nora Eason
good job