I promise

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By nicloetta •

Your friends pressure you; it's our prom, have some fun! Drinking and driving, makes you look cool Just go to the party, It will be fun I promised my mom I would be back by two She said if I drank not to drive, I promised you mom no driving drunk she said to be smart and call her for a ride. I promised you mom I'd call for a ride The party was at Jimmys and I decided not to drink. an hour later i decided to leave The party became bore, I still did not drink, Drugs and alcohal, there not for me I started to drive down that five mile road home A light so bright, it blinded me A big bang a loud crash I lie breathless and think I did not drink! I did not drink and drive! so why am I the one who will die? This poem is to my cousin, to my best friend R.I.P we all love you 12/03/80- 11/26/03

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March 28, 2005 17:45lacebutterflies

this is a really good poem. i like the message it contains. No one should have to die because of a drunken driver.

May 29, 2005 00:43wishing_on_stars

I agree, the message is good. I'm sorry that that had to happen.

August 22, 2005 22:18Stacey

This poem is a good message to people out there. good job!

September 14, 2005 14:24rory t

im really sorry for your loss. its a great expressive poem xx