Precious Heaven

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By Craney •

I don't want be in heaven where I feel like hell Where I have to follow always what the others tell Where opinion of mine doesn't cost a dime Where I'm frigthened all the time for the soul of mine Struggling every single moment, praying day by day Stressed and broken, always wonder: Where is Godly way? My complains oh dear forbidden, and I can not tell That I want to leave that "heaven" where I feel like hell Then, I came to you My Father and you understood Your support was so delightful and I knew "You are good" You have never given up on the wretch like me I might look so funny Lord when you talked to me Real meaning of the heaven stood in front of me And in that so precious moment I felt I was free I was happy I was laughting praising Holy God So, if I should come to heaven, I will be so glad!

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March 11, 2008 18:48 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

excellent!

March 22, 2008 23:54 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I like this poem. It's words are very profound! No one wants to be in a church or any group where they feel like Hell. Heaven is the Home of God and He wants us to enjoy his home when we go there. We practice here to learn enjoyment and respect so that we will know without doubt how to use it when in the presence of God and Heaven. Finally, You learn at the end of this poem that The only presence (God's) is what makes it Heaven...anyway that is my idea and perception today. Your poem is very good please keep writing. Capristar