live to love the moment!!!, by **The Rose that Blooms from the Heart**
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this is the happiest i've ever felt,
i want this moment to last.
without it i think i'll melt,
but i know it will soon be the past.
the present has come and gone,
it will never again come.
night is turning to dawn,
and thats all im running from.
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| Posted: 2008-01-15 22:18:34 UTC |
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| 2008-01-16 00:19:28 | Etrysani |
| hey, i stopped by because you have left a few messages on some of my poems. I wanted to say thank you, and that I'd let you take that one poem you really liked but I am trying to get some of my things published and that's one of them. sorry. wish i could help. I like this poem, by the way. you're a good writer. I think you could enter something of your own. you have a lot of tallent here. |
| 2008-01-16 05:10:33 | **The Rose that Blooms from the Heart** |
| thanx any way i understand and ya know id feel bad about doing that anyway so its no problem at all. i appriciate the comment but the ting is my teachers cant read between the lines like i would like them to. but ya know thats ok cuz i like my poems and i guess you do too so thanx!!! |
| 2008-02-21 23:01:32 | true_poet |
| This poem is really good. Short and cute Keep writing!! Checkout my poems :-) |
| 2008-06-10 14:22:12 | ray! |
| thx for commenting on my poem, i wish more people would!
I like your poem! |