the universe

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By Chrissy

Your smile is the moon My laugh is the sun Your yell is the clouds My tears are the rain We are the universe Together–we create peace You don’t see it You don’t care Where are you? When I truly need help? When I am so down, and blue? That’s when you should be around But if you don’t know, Then why would you be? Should I tell you how I feel? Then you can be there for me Even if you knew, would you? I don’t know why you would I’ve never done anything for you Except love you, more than anyone else Spend my hours awaiting the day You finally look in my general direction But I guess that’s not enough. I suppose the universe is about to fall

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February 16, 2008 03:05Simply-Me-20104

WOW.. I'm sure a lot of others can relate to this poem! I love the personification and metaphor used in this poem! Great Job!

April 11, 2009 03:43!!! A DOUBLE EDGED SWORD !!!

i have to agree this is amazing !!