Secret Notes, by Mollzyyx
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She wants to talk but can only write him little notes,
There is one question the answer she wants to know.
All her other questions float around her head,
Wanting to be heard wanting to be said.
She wants to shout and scream at him,
She wants to say rude things, but that would be dim.
Instead more notes in his tray,
Secret messages they do say.
The notes have no author, no name at the bottom,
His search to find her has been forgotten,
He reads the notes – of course he does,
He doesn’t realise these notes are about love.
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Posted: 2008-02-04 18:37:30 UTC |
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2008-02-04 17:46:41 | Mollzyyx |
Please Read This and give Feedback! x |
2008-02-05 23:55:25 | Simply-Me-20104 |
Thank you SO much for the comments! I REALLY appreciate it I do! This is a great poem! I LOVE the way it has that little story behind it all that just intrigues the reader! It's really sweet too. |
2008-03-17 12:29:25 | I'm Not Romantic, Romeo... |
This is great. I could feel some emotional connection with the 'she' in this poem. Good job. |
2009-01-09 14:55:02 | Danny Wilson |
This is a good Poem but I feel more could be in it maybe about him.Of course I am just like you Learning and am just trying to be helpfull. Danny |