can anybody hear me

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By Invisible Poet •

can anybody out their hear me, or are you deaf as well as blind you never saw who i could be you never put my past deeds behind, im talking to a wall nothing i say can be heard or it makes no sense at all can you even hear just one word i guess everyone pays a price if they make one wrong choice i didn't know my sacrifice would be to lose my voice maybe you just ignore what really happened to me maybe because im to poor to by your cup of escher tea can anybody hear the words hear my plea no matter how obsurd just answer me please

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February 14, 2008 06:37♥Just Sam♥

I know I don't really write poetry. I just kind space out all my thoughts so that they look like they're in a poem's form. This poem remind me a lot of my boyfriend. I like it.

February 18, 2008 04:10~Stay_Beautiful~20104

I can totally relate to this poem! It really suckz... but you have to stay optimistic and know that there are ppl out there who love you and listen... you just have to ask!

February 18, 2008 06:40Invisible Poet

thank you, i know this, that person just lives to far away to help most of the time

May 7, 2008 14:14Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears*

i really agree with ~Stay_Beautiful~20104 when she said
that there are ppl out there who love you and listen... you just have to ask! well aniways this poem is really good and it reminds me of me

January 16, 2009 17:35Destinee Amber Kohlman

your poems are very good and so full of emotion. do you have a myspace? [email protected] email me sometime :)

April 25, 2009 21:46Destinee Amber Kohlman

Hey i added you on myspace

February 1, 2013 09:56Natural_beauty_Ashe

Nice I really like it