Alone

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By ***^^Nicole^^***@K@:Iifetime7poet4eva!

In my heart, something bothers me everyday, a need of such, a need of being accompanied. My heart wants something, something i dont have, nor will ever have. Destiny has fallen upon me, and the clock ticks time of sufferment. For my heart sobs, and my tears wont hold, my face wont stand smiling, and as this feeling overcomes me, i feel like i'll never be happy. My life has turned against me, my fears have come true, and my hopes have only faded. I feel like i'm waiting for something never to come, i throb to know what it is, but nothing comes to mind. Suddenly my faith isn't the same, my life has turned before my eyes, i feel tears running. and my heart suffers once more.

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to anyone who reads this poem: i hope u enjoy and pleaz vote or comment. thankz!

April 21, 2008 19:39 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

I'm giving you a 9 for you deserve it.For one thing whether or not this is true for you in your life or not, you have captured the same effect in the reading of this poem! I think it's great! I wanna say though, that without hope my dear poet, we are of all people most misewrable! please have hope! :) sincerly Glo

i have a lot of hope, my dear friend. This poem was written when i was sad about a month ago-before i found this website. im glad u give such wonderful advice. -Nicole*

April 22, 2008 23:04 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Nicole, You call me friend...Let's do that!! Be friends I'd be honored to be your friend. Glo

yes, lets be friends! do u want my email, Glo? -Nicole =)

May 5, 2008 20:24 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Good dealz Nicole...We are Friendz! :) God Bless You. Love Glo

May 5, 2008 20:26 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

sure! give your email if you wish to. maybe we can exchange emails too. :) love Glo

May 18, 2008 07:20Nora Eason

Clap! Clap! this is good, but i have to agree with Glo,in order to live in this world the way it is you have to have hope and faith.
May God bless you and hold you in the palm of his hands forever.

June 3, 2008 18:25Morgan

thid is really good,
the deepness is extraordinary.

you caught everyday life at its lamest and turns it into beauty.


kudos.

September 4, 2008 14:47 ~~~~GLOSTARG~~~~

Hi Nicole! God Bless You today and always! :) love Glo

October 7, 2008 17:05Devika

amazing!!! i feel the same way....u put it into words so well