My heart is torn

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By Eclipse of the Moon •

My heart is torn. Cut so deep, that not even caring words can reach. my soul is broken, with words that were spoken. That I never knew, until tonight. You promised to never leave me. You promised to never hurt me again. Yet what have you done? You've gone back on your word, so many times. That I don't believe you anymore. You say you love me, Yea, I'm sure thats true. You don't care, you've strung me along, for so long. I gave you my heart, yet you just completely tore it apart. I gave you all my love, forever and always. I hate what you've done! I hate that you're so immature. you told someone, that you didn't want to be married to me. Yet you said, you didn't want to hurt me. HA! you've strung me along, like a damned rag doll. I'm going to move on. I don't care anymore. You broke my heart, when the love I give is true. I will love you forever more, but I'm going to move on.

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May 22, 2008 14:18ray!

good for you!

June 29, 2008 00:13Katelyn7

This was really good and powerful! nice ending!

May 19, 2009 21:39...

Wow! This is great, really powerful, I love the similie you've used: "you've strung me along, like a damned rag doll" Makes the poem so powerful and honest! It's great!