Not Right, by Annie B. SnowRaven
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This happens to me often
But I really don't know why
It always catches me by surprise
And there's nothing I can do
I feel upset
I feel sad
can't talk to my mom nor my dad
I'm alone
I always have been
But never, as I remember,
Ever felt this lonely
No one is talking to me
Maybe they're avoiding me?
And so I ask the same question all over again
...
What the hell is wrong with me??
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| Posted: 2008-05-13 19:29:26 UTC |
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| 2008-05-19 14:18:17 | Ashley Reneë *Raining Tears* |
| wow maybe you should talk to ur mom or dad "I feel upset
I feel sad
can't talk to my mom nor my dad"
the best way to say this is that if you tell some one you feel a lot better except for the fact that they look at you different than before i mean your the same person that u were b4 you told them anything trust me been there done that another way that i can tell you is atleast you have a dad my dad died at 34 about three years ago may 17 2005 and the worst thing is saturday it was three years and i forgot about it and i was in the hostpital visiting my pawpaw and i looked at the date and it was the 18th and i wondered how i forgot such an important date? and my point is you should tell them because what if something happened to them and you wanted to tell them something really important but they passed away and you couldnt tell them? i mean im not trying to act like a big sister or anything but talk to the person who is there for you b4 there gone my younger brother talks to me because he doesnt want to lose me since the day i tried to kill myself and went to the hostpital and had to go to a rehab for my problem so think about it...
xx ashley
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| 2008-05-27 10:14:10 | MorbidMaiden |
| I know exactly how you feel - you've caught it in words. And the worst part is the inability to talk to anyone about it... but by putting it in a poem you've done just that. It's a good thing. The last question I've asked myself many times and never found an answer. You did a good thing posting this *hugs* |